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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-04-27 08:08 PM


Beautiful Black Pearl

I gave a black Tahitian pearl
to satisfy a lovely girl.
The pearl looked like it
was exactly where it belonged
the moment she put it on.

There's nothing as
beautiful in this world
as a black pearl
upon the neck of a
beautiful girl.

Beautiful black pearl,
you have been truly blessed,
to hang around her neck,
to lay upon her chest.

JamesLee
April25
2004

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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2004-04-27 11:33 PM


Wow, James!

This was so very beautiful.  It is so nice to read your fine words again.  I hope all is well in your life.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-28 03:10 AM


beautiful
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-04-28 03:53 AM


Two beauties, the girl and the black pearl, blended in one lovely vision, rendered by your heart so tenderly.
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-04-28 06:23 AM


pearls are my birthstone
although
I have never received a black one.

nicely  done, JamesM

*s
M

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-04-28 08:45 AM


Very nice James.  Enjoyed the read and got the visual, I could see the Black Pearl.  Great write!
JL

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
6 posted 2004-04-28 09:57 AM


This is very sweet James.

Corinne

Censored
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 86

7 posted 2004-04-28 09:33 PM


I really love this! Great write.
dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
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Missouri
8 posted 2004-04-28 09:47 PM


This I like...very much!
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2004-04-29 12:34 PM


Thank you Suetang, passing shadows, Marherita, nakdthoughts, JL, Corinne, Censored and dingusjr for the wonderful responses...James
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