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The Love Of My Life
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The Love Of My Life |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I should point out that this was written purely from imagination and I think most of you know that I am a hopeless romantic and a daydreamer. * * * I see you from a distance As I catch the morning train I glance beneath my umbrella As I seek shelter from the rain While I read my magazine I am conscious of where you are I imagine we're together As I admire you from afar When I close my eyes at night You walk with me along the sand You unearth my hidden passion As you reach down for my hand We alight from the same station And we go our separate ways 'tho you don't know I exist I think of you most days My heart begins to flutter As you begin to walk my way My mind begins to race As I wonder what you'll say That was three years ago today Since you first asked me out Your love came into my life And was able to break the drought My dream became a reality And now we're husband and wife My search for love is over For I have found the love of my life * * * "If I never met him I would have dreamed him into being" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (04-26-2004 09:21 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wow what a love story come true blessed is the rain that falls and unites 2 hearts beneath one umbrella |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love it "when a plan comes together" - happy for you my friend, in all the ways there are. jimmy |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How lovely. A lovely story. Love, Joyce |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Wow! A Fairy Tale Come True. BEeeeautiful! I believe also in ...in the beginning and...happily ever after! Great write...Great life! pictureme :-) |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Sigh...and Sigh again. How Beautiful! I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Very enjoyable to read! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue, this was a lovely tale of romance and liked the picture, too!  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
...Sigh...what a beautiful, sweet tale, makes me want a hug! ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your style |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the rhythm and rhyme of your words, Sue hope you are wellM |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue You definitely are a hopeless romantic as I am myself but that's OK that just means we have an open heart to explain........I really like the first part of this and I'd like to try and sing along with some of it if you don't mind..... Have a good day Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your daydreaming is wonderfully creative and romantic. First there is the thought, then the image begins to form and reality is ready to manifest. Very lovely. Love, Margherita  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice, happy ending too! JL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Women tell me this all the time..that i'm in their dreams....Have you ever seen Freddie from Nightmare on Elm Street? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your fabulous comments which I appreciate. Toerag - Yes, I know Freddie and he is a very unattractive man!!lol Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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