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azblond
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0 posted 2004-04-26 01:07 AM



I am the radiant smile from a child you made laugh today
I am the tears from the old woman you read a letter to on your way
I am the song of the birds who greet your from their trees
I am the softness of the air on a hot summer night breeze

I am the scent of the flowers you placed tenderly at the alter
I am the hand that you held gently when you saw another falter
I am the painting in the studio of the artist you don’t know
I am the seeds you plant in the ground in hopes that they will grow

I am through living this life in the form you knew me before
So when you spend time at my resting place cry for me no more
I am not lying in the ground…I have finally learned to fly
I began to live immediately…you see only the body can die.

I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind...

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Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
1 posted 2004-04-26 01:23 AM


and you are of a poets heart...

thought you might be going in a different direction with the 'I Am' appellation  -- or perhaps that is what you meant?

nevertheless -- enjoyed the read and the sentiment

Cold_Eternity
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Canda
2 posted 2004-04-26 01:29 AM


I really enjoyed this read. Thank you for posting it made me think and made my day.

~Across a thousand leagues and passed the impossible, lies our childlike innocence, and in that our peace.~

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-04-26 01:53 AM


This is really good and touched my heart.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Hugs
Ethel

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-26 02:40 AM


beautiful
Beki
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5 posted 2004-04-26 02:42 AM


very nice
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