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With Passion
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With Passion |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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I want you to love me with passion. I want to feel my heart race again from your touch, Loose my breath from your kiss, Drown in the depths of your eyes Smoldering with love and desire. I want to lie in your arms, Feel your heart beat, Listen to the sound of you breathing as you touch me gently. I want to know all your souls secrets, all your fears. I want to know your hopes and dreams, Your fondest memories, your wildest desires. I want to be your lover and your best friend, Your strength when you are weak, Your support when you are strong. I want to love you through the good and the bad. I want to walk on beaches hand in hand with you, And watch the sun set over the mountains in the desert. I want to travel lifes roads with you at my side. I want to age with you, And wake up some day years and years away to you, Lying by my side, And whisper in your ear… “I want you to love me with passion…” Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Oh... very good! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bravo! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think we all want that...good write |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
aww, pretty!! ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You did give your matching heartbeat this, didn't you? A good passionate offer, azblond. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I know this feeling VERY well and you said it perfectly  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem....sensual with longing, and still suitable for this forum. Very good.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you write these feelings with so much passion I can feel the longing - your images are powerful - Paul |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
With many thanks... Tis good to be in love...everyday! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You write of romance well!  |
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