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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-04-25 12:26 PM



now that was weird
that spinning object
winged, six-legged
spinning on its back

I attempted to help it
put it upright
right back  to its back
it went
spinning again
spinning, spinning

one more
up righting
one more up-side-downing
spinning, spinning

I moved on
to accomplish my chore
heretofore planned
all the while
considering its plight

should I have
put it out of its misery?
was it misery
or merely a merry-go-round ride?

I’ll look again
on my return pass
it it’s still spinning
not out of gas
I’ll show mercy

kill it
end its suffering
its endless spinning
there it is
spinning

it uprights itself
then onto its back again
spinning, spinning
stomp!

remorse
for now I wonder
though it’s only April
could it be a may fly
one who’s days number
only one?

did I cut short
its mere 24 hours?
did I end its suffering
or its joy?
was it spinning
as if on a toy?

who was I
to decide?

©April 25, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2004-04-25 12:44 PM


very well done...A nice pensing
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-04-25 01:40 PM


tough issue

been there a few times myself

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-04-25 01:50 PM


Probably a mercy killing, eh?
Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2004-04-25 02:03 PM


you wonder if it
suffered
as you crushed it
to the floor
perhaps its role
was finished
perhaps its chores
no more

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