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The Embrace of each Branch
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The Embrace of each Branch |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Where in dark woods can I find you? beside the flowing river with no end: haunting shadow holding flowers for a moment, on my palms the still - felt silence-- in endless colors emerging petals were falling I came upon them at dawn bent down to touch silk meaning, while trees were quiet& blue veils went unrecognized in the sky for hours I stood listening to earth Today, ask me to walk on the other side of the bridge -- read a part of your sadness, your embrace from forgotten novels most stories are about time, and lovers fade your words ever softly Still the night held no stars we danced in the wake of dust gathering memories to hold upon heart your beauty stirred wind haunting my eyes Your whisper, I bury in my soul tucked against pressed lips and gentle fingers here I know the embrace of each branch Leave the roses in their box let rain scatter their ashes in rhythms of wind and water they will eventually make way to the sea --lonely and searching for your hands ~~**~~ The sound of silence calls, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream The echo of our souls meet ~~**~~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-23-2004 12:04 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very very nice....Lovely, in fact. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your free verse |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i just fell in love with this  hugs hugs hugs |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
And I love your imagry... erm, if I could spell it right, I would love it. It was a very very very beautiful. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for a moment, on my palms the still - felt silence-- in endless colors emerging ~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~blue veils went unrecognized in the sky~~ ~~~~~~~~ Today, ask me to walk on the other side of the bridge -- ~~~~~~~ ~~Still the night held no stars we danced in the wake of dust~~ gathering memories to hold upon heart your beauty stirred wind haunting my eyes Your whisper, I bury in my soul tucked against pressed lips and gentle fingers ~~here I know the embrace of each branch~~ Leave the roses in their box ~~let rain scatter their ashes in rhythms of wind and water~~ they will eventually make way to the sea --lonely and searching for your hands ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ have mercy........................ (forget my poetry...I'm going to print YOURS out and put them with my photos.)  *sigh* ... Lordy Lauren, this was beautiful beyond my words...once again your words haunt me butterfly lovely. High inspire on this one me groovy girl... HIGH INSPIRE.   ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"Your whisper, I bury in my soul tucked against pressed lips and gentle fingers here I know the embrace of each branch" ~ A painted picture through words alone. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An enchanted atmosphere plunged in soft melancholy. Very beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
L, you have written so much beauty but none more eloquent and beautiful before, and your soul never shared so much before... Gosh gal, do you know how much you are loved aroud here and by me? You are a butterfly who's wings fly so very high. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for hours I stood listening to earth ========================== and then you turned it into poetry. ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd this is SO beautiful! Love ya pretty lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love ya all...thank you ~~**~~ |
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