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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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West Virginia

0 posted 2004-04-22 10:01 PM


ALWAYS WITH A SCAR ON MY SOUL

For all that I have lost...for all that I long to be
I look for a light...I look for anything
I find comfort in the night...I find life in my dreams
I look for my place yet all I feel is empty
...but always with a scar on my soul

What do I run from...who do I run to
I feel the ache in my heart with or without you
I hang in the valley and walk this earth
To fill my senses to find my entire worth
...but always with a scar on my soul

I talk to the heaven...I cry to him above
I laugh behind a mask just to cover it up
I smile in the rain and I give thanks to the sky
I hold up the mountain... though with saddened eyes
...but always with a scar on my soul

I try to hold on...I try to let it go
I've lived to be loved; a love I may never know
You may have the power but I breathe the air
I can close my eyes but you'll always be there
...but always with a scar on my soul

I walk through the seasons...they walk with me
I give of my gifts and love individually
I live the moments and remember stories told
I love the best I can...but always with a scar on my soul






Sauni The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-04-22 10:06 PM


A wounded heart with hope.  A palpable mix of feelings comes through in this write.  Nice.

Susan

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2004-04-22 10:24 PM


This is beautifully written....the spirit lives on long after the body leaves...
Enjoyed the read
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-04-23 02:35 AM


this is sadly beautiful
Obscurity
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since 2003-12-04
Posts 153
In A Melancholic Dream
4 posted 2004-04-23 02:49 AM


Very sad, and I can really relate to this one
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
5 posted 2004-04-23 02:16 PM


Well written. Enjoyed!
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-04-23 02:38 PM


I havent seen you for awhile, it is so good to read you again Saunni and this is immediately a favorite for me....
I understand this and feel it.  Hugs.

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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USA
7 posted 2004-04-23 05:45 PM


nice read
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-04-23 08:01 PM


Yes, I know about those scars...James
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