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SimpleDiscourse Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 79 |
Yeah, so I got tired of posting in Teen Poetry and just decided to post this in Open instead. Just to see what happens. I haven't written any poetry in a long time. So, here goes. =================================== early spring came in the form of late summer and you are telling me "this is perfect...perfect." music weaves itself in and out of the scene with so much dissonance and i will insist that this is far from perfect because our hands are not covered in blood still i feel guilty so guilty and, oh, this has gone far beyond where it was intended to go this is far from perfect because our mouths speak not of what we know still i feel guilty so guilty under fruitless trees and a blinding sun you are still telling me "this is perfect...perfect." |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Erin this is amazing full of powerful imagery-- welcome to open, it is good to see you posting here...  ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty good write here...liked it |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I found this to be an excellent write-- stirred up some cool images. Enjoyed reading this very much. Keep on posting here! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very profound...I enjoyed finding what we want and can't have sometimes wishes our desire more... |
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