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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-04-22 02:46 PM



I am Joy and Sorrow
Like the Sun and the Moon
Each tender in its feelings
Each changing in its moods

In the bright light of Sunshine
Carefree birds most sweetly sing
Flowers bloom in joyous splendor
And the breeze dances in glee

In the darkened shadows of Moonlight
My tear drops softly fall
My heart aches in its longing
For the Sun to come to call


But for each shade of Night
The Day comes upon the marrow
And life continues to revolve
between the Joy and the Sorrow

S.A.T.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2004-04-22 03:14 PM


....and life continues on, Susan

well done
*s
M

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2 posted 2004-04-22 03:19 PM



A most lovely poem, Susan.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-04-22 03:26 PM


Very nicely penned Susan.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-22 04:57 PM


Hey, this is a true blessing to read!
JL
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5 posted 2004-04-22 06:49 PM


“How sweet it is.”  Great poem!
JL


Susan
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6 posted 2004-04-22 07:41 PM


I'm glad you all enjoyed this.  Thank you for your responses.  

Susan

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-04-23 02:42 AM


I can relate to this
PKreturns
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8 posted 2004-04-23 01:14 PM


But for each shade of Night
The Day comes upon the marrow
And life continues to revolve
between the Joy and the Sorrow


That was a powerfully poetic ending...

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