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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2004-04-22 08:44 AM


we talked about firearms
piercings and tattoos
and other things
you can't show someone
in church

you laughed after
and lost count
of the sheep
you said something vulgar
under your breath

and with your eyes
that didn't want to sleep
so you made them look away
before they got caught there
your hands were restless too

they danced with buttons
on your vest and my eyes
pretended not to notice
so I made them look away
before I said something too

just loud enough for you to hear


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Dark


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Lady In White
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1 posted 2004-04-22 08:46 AM





Did the candles flicker
at the whisper?


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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2 posted 2004-04-22 08:59 AM


Am lovin your work

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-04-22 09:09 AM


"your hands were restless too

they danced with buttons
on your vest and my eyes
pretended not to notice
so I made them look away
before I said something too

just loud enough for you to hear"

Gawd...love the way you...well, just love it!
~Hugs & Winks~

Lady Of Light
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since 2003-10-23
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4 posted 2004-04-22 09:10 AM


The little flicker in your eyes any woman would love to see Dark one.
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2004-04-22 09:17 AM


so I made them look away
before I said something too

just loud enough for you to hear'''

~~

your words are affecting....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
6 posted 2004-04-22 10:32 AM


Yahuh...certain to carry on into the rest of the days thoughts *S*
Excellent
TD

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
7 posted 2004-04-22 11:41 PM


Looks like an extended stay...Good!

You do have a knack, yep.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2004-04-23 08:24 AM


Thanx ya' all

as usual I don't deserve the comments
but I have grown to enjoy them
kinda like a little crown royal in my ovalteen

Thanks again

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