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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-06-28 01:21 PM


Impersonal evil fills absurdity of means
More and more relative to mere objects bequeathed
We don’t need the co-op of a bias empty table
Breathless tempo, supreme the willing and able
Intrusive this belief, impressionable entertainer
Efficient the stream, his gift of portrayal
Found in a room with machine gunning arches
Swollen blood trickles from his wicked contortions

Giving faithful account for the heinous to breed
His deafening factories cramping where the weary need feed
Life governed by insidious habit
That child of light might be forever saddened

Kindly fatherhood with genius at hand
Swiftly catching features salient & grand
Philosophy searching for lighter views
Refilling on moral impression & unspeakable news

How the happiest of images, stream mythical works
We are drawn by the hand of a heart that patiently waits
Noticing clearly our pattern of events
Through resignation in itself, is real happiness

States of mind slowly thaw to a comprehensive vision
Of human life, which follows poetic influence
Of long-dead memories turned over with the corn
Visiting the innocence once again reborn
It’s unit of measure a blind chance of faith?
When robbery at last comes forward close & straight

An occupational niche in the scheme of such things
Determines nature and gives distinctive picturesque means
Recording a gradual permeation selling curiosities
In a largely governed world that is complex and slow to change

We can rearrange an entire sphere by a simple course of action
Kinship is a relative to a natural system
Omnipresent feeds life sharing a subtle wafer
Temporal scale of originality
Created by the voice and hands of al that be


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Martie
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1 posted 2004-06-28 01:25 PM


LeeJ

You are such an intelligent writer...and a very gifted poet.  I'm amazed by this poem!

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2004-06-29 07:16 AM


ummmm.... In my minds eye I see something different than a novelist here, it shows a scene of reality, one that is shown on newscasts, nightly. There is a leader of thoughts present, he has a great following, at least he think he has...I am not one of them.....dang! I will stop here before this reply turns into a novel...
enjoyed
------ice
   ><>

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-06-29 07:51 AM


LeeJ
And that is the news for today, enjoyed.
Good morning sweety.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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4 posted 2004-06-29 08:03 AM


How the happiest of images, stream mythical works
We are drawn by the hand of a heart that patiently waits
Noticing clearly our pattern of events
Through resignation in itself, is real happiness

still waiting myself;  enjoyed;
              miscellanea

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