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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-04-21 09:06 AM


Notice the little flip of hair
while sweeping  night thoughts
off to side.

Dressed up in prim and proper,
the epitome of professionalism,
confidence exuding in daylight
but when the day gives way
              returns to night.....

leather and lace,
romance takes it's turn
            sensuality released
from hold of yearn

while being the she
that everyone else     rarely sees
wardrobed in two sides of self...

                { nights of desire
                 days of life.}

{written from wonderful inspiration... }


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-04-21 09:11 AM


Gentle Spirit
Excellent write, enjoyed.

Soleil Noir
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USA
2 posted 2004-04-21 09:12 AM



Well, look at you...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-04-21 09:32 AM


but when the day gives way...


nicely done Donna
M

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-21 12:43 PM


nicely done...whatever your inspiration
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-04-21 01:16 PM


WHOOOHOOOO!  The other side of the lady..love it!

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-04-21 01:20 PM


I think I know this inspiration....
Very good write, Sweet Lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2004-04-21 01:23 PM


Delightful! ~ and may you have much more in your night life to inspire you further! lol


Linda

JL
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8 posted 2004-04-21 03:53 PM


Very interesting write.  Great story.  Keep them coming!
JL


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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2004-04-22 08:48 AM


divine inspiration....you say it beautifully...

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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