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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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love colors were salty when I licked them with scotch tape on the end of my tongue I said they were sweet perhaps tan flavored or pale, depending on how wet the sun was when I closed my eyes and wore gloves the texture of love was smooth and had edges that my face fell off of Dark |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Saying good morning to you with smile eyes Dark. Have missed you. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I think I shall read this again with my eyes wide shut... because I can... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
languishing in having you and your words back among us again Dark... gawd you've been missed and I see that in your abscence you have not lost your magical touch...  Good morning babe! It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Intriguing write, enjoyed. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow! Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Deca says... stay awhile and say it again. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
even your whispers have edges.....  ~~**~~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS As always, sensually pleasing!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it really is good to have you back |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
THANX to you all........brings a lift to the Darkster, just to have your keyfingers hugging my eyes. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
long time no read... only took two lines and I remembered why I enjoyed those times past when I could come here and find an offering or two from your pen... you've lost nothing in delivery nor in imagery... it is all as it was, excellent |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
on how wet the sun was ====================== as wet as your poetry your personif and imagery is word magic DS! ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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