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Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2004-04-21 08:24 AM



The bed is made
The sex was great
The dishes washed
You cooked-I ate

You vacuumed the floor
The house is neat
You can leave
Come back next week.

© Copyright 2004 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-04-21 08:28 AM


Toe....you are SOOOOO bad!!
Morning hugs and a cup of Chai tea to you as well.

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-04-21 08:42 AM


Okey dokey!
Maid


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-04-21 08:44 AM


Toe,
Well you did get one Okey dokey.

Soleil Noir
Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
4 posted 2004-04-21 09:59 AM



Toe...you're a treasure!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-04-21 12:41 PM


lol
INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
6 posted 2004-04-21 08:02 PM


OUTSTANDING ! ! !

This works for me....

INclan

Balladeer
Administrator
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
7 posted 2004-04-21 10:11 PM


Soleil Noir...if, by treasure you mean he has a sunken chest, you're probably right!!

Toeboy, you better take some vitamins. You getting weak, boy!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
8 posted 2004-04-22 07:07 AM


Very cute as usual, does he get a cut rate for pay by the month.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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