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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2004-06-25 04:27 PM


The glare was harsh, I blinked,
and missed most everything,
the all that must have been
in an instant without me.

A cloud moved, a bird maybe
put the last twig in a nest
or the energy of sun
redirected happiness.  

To look and see, remember,
eyes open to it all,
and watch the sea ebb and flow,
and the beauty of a child
grown to adulthood
but from a stare a blink  
and the all that must have been
is as if it never was.  

The glare of love harsh and stark  
turns our eyes downward
and the world lies at our feet
in the shadow lands of fear
doomed to procreate
unsighted human beings
unable to know or see …
what really must have been!


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-06-25 04:40 PM


Helen

I believe you see remarkably, even with your eyes closed.  I do understand this feeling, though and your poem got me to thinking, how many times we blink within a minute and then add up the cost...we miss alot!  

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2004-06-25 05:22 PM


Hi Martie - yes, but I've also been thinking how good it can be to just close our eyes, let the world grow up alone, and allow ourselves the privilege of feeling instead of only seeing.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-26 04:42 AM


awesome!
Honeybunch
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4 posted 2004-06-26 04:45 AM


  Thanks passing shadows.
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