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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-06-22 07:35 PM



‘Tis said the cup’s half empty
Or surely the cup’s half full;
‘Tis dependent on your outlook
That’ll determine the one you know

But as I go throughout this life,
No longer do I say,
“The cup I see is half full”,
For every day that passes

I notice more and more
Someone keeps talking my half away
Making it harder to see
A half full cup that’s riding close to empty.

© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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1 posted 2004-06-22 08:16 PM


Very interesting thoughts here.  btw, I've a pitcher full, may I pour you some?

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2004-06-22 10:42 PM


Good thoughts here...
Brought a babble to mind...
Optimism is a magical elixer, one that is home brewed.  Although it is true that it is not to everyone's liking, and that some seek to gather more than their own fair share...
The regenerative properties fill the cup...for empty never comes.
TD

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-23 03:01 AM


I know what you mean
iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-23 04:03 AM


Enjoyed your ponderings, steavenr!  I'm an optimist; I'd say half full and wishing you a full cup.   ....jo
steavenr
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5 posted 2004-06-24 01:19 AM


thanks for the comments...all...though I must confess I wrote this totally out of character...just a trivial thought I had after hearing someone proclaim their cup was always half empty...mine never gets much below full...I have far too much to be thankful for...mine is generally running over
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