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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-06-19 02:55 PM


The way you're bathed in light,
Makes me forget the dark of night.
The way you're bathed in light,
Is a gentle beautiful sight.
The way you're bathed in light,
Reminds me of my might,
The way you're bathed in light,
Is so beautifully bright.
The way you're bathed in light,
Fades my scars of fight.
The way you're bathed in light,
Floats me high as a kite.
The way you're bathed in light,
I know you're just right.
The way you're bathed in light,
Sets me free to take flight.
The way you're bathed in light,
Makes me forget the dark of night.

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-06-19 09:46 PM


Very nice Kyle!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2004-06-21 09:34 AM


Lovely
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-06-21 12:27 PM


may you always have that precious light
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-06-21 02:13 PM


Dear Hot Flakes ~

I know that you knew I'd click on this one ~ and am I ever pleased that I did! There was soooo much Light in this poem of love that I thought that I was back in Heaven!

Illuminatingly lovely!

Love & Lotsa Light!
Linda

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