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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-06-17 11:22 PM


Alone in the mirror of your thoughts
Succumb this man made self restraint

Ruffles and lace, just accents to stir the mind
Yet created raw a wonder best defined

That my heart has chosen you
Rejoicing in the beauty I was born into

My hands grow light in touch
Tracing your name upon my own skin

Undiscovered country where none have ever been
Tropics and mountain peaks, majestic

Unique the blushes of supple rushes
Along the laze of journey’s blaze

Pinks and reds…moist and lush of wilderness spreads
All seasons and all dreams combined in color blind

The arch of delicate to lift to heavens muse the hues
In turn along the soft of winding roads and painted toes

Defiant of time…scented lily white and polished shine
The muscle tone of tigress poised to hunt at dawn

A quiet strength that lingers on
Seduction in as much as dreams are chaste and slept upon

The child that sparkles in a vibrant heart to surface at the shore of see
The most that I had ever hoped to be…myself as dear you are to me

Copyright Kkh 6/17/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-06-17 11:33 PM


There is such sensuality in this, though I am uncertain that its truth speaks to me, I can interpret it in several different ways.  Still, on a deeper level, I can feel its breath stirring.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-06-18 09:57 AM


Definitely sensual undertoe with suggestive impressionism woven through the seems of observational desire...  Most alluring.

-MVS


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2004-06-18 10:21 AM


I to agree with both comments above, adding, that you are tracing the universe with your new understanding...and selective choices...good one.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-06-18 12:37 PM


Excellent write Kathleen...
Softly sensual...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-06-18 12:42 PM


Oh, how lovely TD !!  A keeper for sure.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-18 01:39 PM


I only wish I could write like this
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