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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-06-17 03:19 PM


Crumpled paper on the floor,
Waste basket brimming full,
My brain can't storm anything,
And half I write is bull.

Ideas come ~ then fly away,
I wonder where they go!
I wish they'd stay, so I could write,
~ At least one little mot!

A sheet of white, glares at me,
Just daring me to write,
But wisdom pearls, come not at all,
Tho' I try with all my might!

Perhaps I'm trying way too hard,
To be Edgar Allen Poe,
So I'll put the pen, back in my hand,
And let the blue ink flow!

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-17-2004 09:17 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-17 03:22 PM



'Atta Girl!

I'm thinking you're an Allen...

[and don't you dare read alien...]

Susan
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2 posted 2004-06-17 03:23 PM


Yes, yes, we must be who we in essence our and find our own words.  You do beautifully sweet angel.

  Susan

btw, did you see my attempt at senryu, inspired by you, you know.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-06-17 03:44 PM


Sunshine ~

Well, my Twin Soul IS an "Alan"! lol
So I suppose you are correct! lol

Thanks for your fun response!

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-06-17 03:48 PM


Susan, I just now read your lovely senryu that was inspired by me! I am honoured!
~ amd I am saving it!

You are such a wonderful addition to our poetic family! ~ and in so many ways!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda


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5 posted 2004-06-17 04:23 PM


You have a voice that's all your own
So what if you're no Poe?
Instead of writing tell-tale heart
A caring one you show!
While you could moan of midnight dreary
You beam an angel's light
And hasten to support a friend,
Helping to make things right.
You are yourself - and how we love
Your tapping on PIP's door
With talent and compassion
We need this, and nothing more.



Magnus
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6 posted 2004-06-17 06:45 PM


Yeah,  leave the Poe to others....you would
not fit well in the pit as the pendulum
swung overhead.....

Nor would you and that pesky little Raven
get along very well.....My understanding
is ravens don't like angels very much....

I think your quill is sharp and ready to
rock at most any second!!!!

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-06-17 07:13 PM


I rarely read Poe...and I mean rarely...but I often read you...who needs a midnight dreary...James
Ericc
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8 posted 2004-06-17 07:19 PM


And in the very act of surrender...the gift of your words is born.

Thank you.

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-06-17 07:21 PM


Earth Angel
Why would you pen fence with Poe?
He was no angel you know.
He sailed a ship on the sea of weary
And kept him a log of dreary.
You my dear ar a delight
In all you do and all you write.



Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-06-17 08:28 PM


Belle of the South ~

You are an absolute Dear! You surely must realize that this touching, poetic response is a must-save! Into my special file it goes!

Right now I am grinning from wing tip to wing tip! lol I may look ridiculous ~ but I'm happy!

Thank you for this, my friend!
You just added to the sweetness of my day!

Linda

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2004-06-17 08:32 PM


Barry, you be one who could fence quills with Poe! ~ and win! I am such a big fan of your Poeish writes! They be dark and dreary ~ and can send little shivers throughout my vestments! lol

What a kind and thoughtful reply you wrote! Thank you very much!

Love & Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2004-06-17 08:35 PM


James ~

Yes, that is true! You do read most of my poems (more than you do Poe's! lol)so I suppose I must have been doing something write! I mean "right"!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2004-06-17 08:37 PM


Eric ~

Hmm! Yes, I see what you mean! A poem was actually born when I just let go and let the blue ink flow!

Big hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2004-06-17 08:45 PM


Mr. T. ~

A second poem by you for me in one day! Well I most humbly curtsey before you with my utmost gratitude and appreciation!

I am saving this lovely poetic response in my secret trove of poetic treasures from my PiP friends!

I received some pretty distressing news about a loved one today and somehow I know everything is going to be just fine. I think my angels prodded all you Pip angels to write things that would perk me up ~ and you did! ~ and you, Sir T, did it two times over!


EA

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