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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-06-15 06:55 PM


Love is unable and cannot, will not,
bind man to land for eternity
but rather allows a soul to evolve
beyond the confines of human existence.

Immortality is the promise of love,
pretenders will not be granted entry,
but how do we qualify, what must we do,
to receive and enjoy such a wonderful gift?

Some have limits to how much they give,
some are scared of a deep commitment,
and some so sufficient unto themselves
refuse to believe in the power of love.

So too does wisdom have a limited scan
with foresight hindered by earthly demands
but avowal of love to a woman, a man,
sets mankind up on the ladder to more.

The ladder is long and turns around corners,
even snaps in the middle to see how we fall,
but the worst test of all is together no more
with the catalyst who allowed love to be.

A catalyst, intermediary, a go-between, agent,
and how sadly we grieve the parting of hands
but love is the victor still faithful and true
to the promise of our immortality.  

But to love and remain as an island alone
trapped in a net of passing priorities
forms a deep channel back onto land
to start the journey all over again.  
  
So sayeth the humbled by love’s awesome power!

Helen


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-06-15 07:57 PM


An interesting insight to ponder.  Enjoyed.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-06-15 07:57 PM


Fabulous...like you thoughts on love...James
Martie
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3 posted 2004-06-15 10:14 PM


Helen


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"immortality is the promise of love,"

I think you are right, because true love is eternal.  Thoughtful and wise, you!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2004-06-16 09:12 AM


Thanks all for the read!  

Martie - "true love" - what is it, how is it, can it even exist in this world?  Love is so very hard to understand but I think about it a lot.

Martie
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5 posted 2004-06-16 10:53 AM


Helen

it doesn't exist in the world, it exists in the heart or soul, if you will.  A place much bigger then the world, and where death doesn't kill it.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2004-06-16 12:40 PM


Powerful!  Well done Helen.

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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