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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-11 11:39 PM



A Princess's Tale
For My Knight, Ryan.....From Your Damsel, The Princess

I am the lucky one.
When all else fails,
I have someone.

Long ago there was no one there,
Only illusions and thoughts,
Perhaps just dreams,
Of someone who cared.

Alas, he came.
My knight in shining. . .
Wait, that's not armor that's glowing brightly!
No, 'tis a heart of gold,
Resting upon his chest.

Sleeping Beauty,
What is it you ask for?
A simple kiss?
I'm sorry,
That he simply cannot do.


© Copyright 2004 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-06-13 02:42 AM


Nice writing...looks like its time to lay the dreams aside and live the real thing...Ain't nothing like the real thing baby...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-06-13 02:49 AM


In accord with James Michael.  Go for the gold.
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3 posted 2004-06-13 04:41 AM


oh my goodness how sweet! I loved it!
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 2004-07-05 02:32 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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