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MovesInSilence
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0 posted 2004-06-07 12:34 PM



You used to be my friend
you use to tell me all was right
I valued your opinion
i defended you when others thought you wrong
Now you tell me a lie
you tell me I have changed
you tell me I’m not as pretty as I used to be
Well I’m here to tell you I have a new love
he tells me I am m beautiful
he tells me I am Perfect
and he's taking over from you
So I now say this
you Demon of weights and measures
you teller of lies ...
Be gone from my bathroom
you have been replaced....

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-07 03:45 AM


Some "friends" can be our worst enemies -- hope your new friend is a true friend!  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-06-07 09:45 AM



that person
in the mirror
has been poofed
for sure...

well done!

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-06-07 10:31 AM


Hey Lina, I have a friend just like that.

njoyed this

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

wranx
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4 posted 2004-06-07 10:53 AM


I've solved that long ago...I dont have any mirrors!

(except for one that's behind the couch)

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5 posted 2004-06-07 11:41 AM


ohhh, look at you trying to be misleading

yeah, i need new scales too LOL, the ones I have tell me to "back away from the cookies"

LOL..you funny

MovesInSilence
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6 posted 2004-06-09 12:01 PM


Thank you for replying

Umm wasn't trying to be missleading but the insparation for this poem came from when i jumped on the scales the last time all i heard was "Moo" so i diced em out the window

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7 posted 2004-06-09 02:02 AM


MOO     MOO mOO      mooo  moo MOO
   MOO moooooo   MOO

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