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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-06-06 09:11 PM


inspired by passing shadow's "Why I Prefer Silence"


if all the lives of those who live were sonnets in form and rhyme
and structured so to fit our days in a very ordered time

‘twould be not long ere we would leave the shelter of our minds
and want the freedom of free verse in random forms and kinds

so seek not order where none exists or structure to reminisce
live only in the measure of your life and pleasure in its gifts

for thou art one remarkable write in soul and heart and mind
the gift that is within thee is your poetry so divine


© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-06-06 09:22 PM


Applause...complete and utter applause!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-06-06 09:52 PM


oh Steaven what to say? I'm honored to have been the inspiration for this wonderful write

thank you

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3 posted 2004-06-06 10:04 PM


Very well said,  well written,  thanx.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-06-07 11:33 AM



Now this...
is a

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2004-06-07 05:32 PM


indeed this is a

Absolutely wonderful!

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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