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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-06-05 08:48 PM


This is for you...

When my eyes close at night and I need some peace instilled
I hold onto those times of touch, a whispered breath,
Knowing that the lasting of it resides forever
And that no matter how the days ahead seem to drain the spirit
I know that it is there for the keeping, waiting for a brighter day.

I stretch out reaching for a feeling
Wanting to write a sonnet, but I am missing your embrace.
When the darkness rules I trade my worries
And picture you in my favor, knowing those words hide behind
That before the sun rises, you will have followed me into sleep.

There...where there is no pain, no sorrow.
Beneath it all, a silent warmth, a rhythm in sync.
M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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1 posted 2004-06-05 09:16 PM


a lovely expression of longing...  wishing you well.
               Sadie

iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-05 11:44 PM


"There...where there is no pain, no sorrow.
Beneath it all, a silent warmth, a rhythm in sync."

Beautiful, Maureen, very much so!

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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-06-05 11:53 PM


Perfectly expressed Maureen. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-06-06 12:44 PM


Beautiful...James
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-06-06 03:26 AM


just lovely
Kevo
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6 posted 2004-06-06 03:58 AM


I really enjoyed your poem.  I often feel that way when away on business.  This one touched me.  Thank you.
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