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0 posted 2004-04-19 11:19 AM



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~*~
As we write our hearts in our poetry
Do the ones of us who read really take time to see
The hurt or confusion inside the writer may feel
Sometimes not fantasy but aches that are real

I'm speaking not of times that we write about
When thinking of our Love so much we laugh and shout
But speaking of the times when feeling from deep inside
That it would feel much better to run away and hide

I know that to myself this poem does surely speak
And not only to others the thoughts would seem to seek
For I want to truly feel others words in my heart
Then maybe I can help with an encouraging word to start

A tender and loving heart seems everyone has here
Writing not always with a smile but sometimes with a tear




© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-19 11:22 AM


I do not doubt for a moment that you, dear Ethel, read with your heart and share in our friends' feelings very sincerely.
This is a very beautiful and thoughtful write.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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2 posted 2004-04-19 11:22 AM


Oh, I do so understand where you are coming from with this sensitive write.

You are just one big walking heart hug, Sweet Ethel Mae!


Linda Lou


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3 posted 2004-04-19 11:24 AM


oh so many times ive cried for someone elses pain...wondering what i could do to make it alright....wishing i could make it better.

poetry touches me deeply...no matter who wrote it.

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4 posted 2004-04-19 11:36 AM


beautiful and thoughtful  yes, i've had many a tear in my eyes and felt their pain in my heart. also the strenghth when needed. thanks


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5 posted 2004-04-19 11:38 AM


I write with tears most of the time .... heart hugssss luv ya sweet lady.....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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6 posted 2004-04-19 11:40 AM


I know where you're coming from Ethel...
Sometimes I write with a tear..but mostly a smile.
~Hugs to you sweet lady~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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7 posted 2004-04-19 12:14 PM


yes I have written through tears and fears , then with smiles as the hurting clears ... and as I read others , I too feel their emotions , we poets have eyes and ears

Hope

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8 posted 2004-04-19 12:30 PM


you understand so well, so deeply
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9 posted 2004-04-19 12:33 PM


Very nice poetic message, Ethel.  I really enjoy reading your thoughts.  
          Sadelite

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10 posted 2004-04-19 01:02 PM


yes, my friend, you cannot help but see...

very caring poem, written well...visuals very much felt...lovely write from a generous heart.

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