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iliana
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0 posted 2004-06-02 02:40 AM

Chameleon sky
leaking color camouflaged
shedding little light.

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2004-06-02 02:56 AM

oh Jo...you are good at these!

iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-02 02:59 AM

Dixie, muchos gracias! These seem to come easy for me compared to many other forms. So, tonight I'm resorting to this -- like I say, my muse is restless....... lol & hugs, jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (06-02-2004 10:42 AM).]

Professor Gloom
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of Depression

3 posted 2004-06-02 08:05 AM

Crimson edges sky
Turns to purple horizon
As it fades away

Gloom

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-06-02 08:19 AM

iliana
It seems you are an inspiration. Good one

Sadelite
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5 posted 2004-06-02 08:40 AM

      complimentary
burst of colors draining bright
    before dusk leans night

Enjoyed your Haiku.  Have a good day iliana!
      Sadie

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-06-02 08:41 AM

wonderful!

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-06-02 04:16 PM

Okay loveing the way you keep with the true Haiku theme, yet the titles are not...excellent!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

gemjop
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8 posted 2004-06-02 04:23 PM

I agree with Dixie, you really are exceptional at these! *jealous* The titles just make them even more rich.

JL
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9 posted 2004-06-02 04:27 PM

Excellent!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-06-02 08:19 PM

This would be me right now...James

VAS
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11 posted 2004-06-02 09:32 PM

one powerful piece!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

kayjay
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12 posted 2004-06-03 12:06 PM

Tranquil reflections
Summer day in sunset's light
May they never end

Nice work! Ken
Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

GG
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Lost in thought

13 posted 2004-06-03 11:50 AM

Ooh, what an awesome beauty...
and then with the title,
it's just WOW!
Well done

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Ericc
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14 posted 2004-06-03 12:47 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

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15 posted 2004-06-04 10:44 AM

Beautiful ~Jo

Thats how the sky looked here at dusk yesterday.....~P

radiating out
along black cloud edges;
sun's last light.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

16 posted 2004-06-04 10:53 AM

Everyone -- thank you so much for stopping by and reading.

Choshi -- that was gorgeous!

jwesley
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17 posted 2004-06-04 10:43 PM

Really like this my friend...

jwesley

iliana
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18 posted 2004-06-04 11:22 PM

Thank you, Jimmy. Hope you're having a pleasant Friday night!

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