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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-01 12:22 PM


Reggae Songs

If I'm gone to long
Suzie gets all uptight
and says that I don't
treat her right.
What am I doing wrong?
I'm just hanging out
at the Mai Tai Bar,
relaxing and listening
to some Reggae songs.

JamesLee
May30
2004

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-06-01 01:47 AM


I love reggae! Maybe, invite her to listen with you?
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-01 02:13 AM


make a bar in your back yard like on "While You Were Out"
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2004-06-01 02:02 PM


Excellent!

Eric

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-06-01 02:04 PM


JamesMichael, Midnightsun has a good idea up there!  Enjoyed.   ...jo
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