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Open Poetry #32

please read...In Passing

pictureme
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since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2004-04-19 12:23 PM

Inn Passing
M. Freeman
*
waiting,
for the dead
to be delivered
like a paycheck
Mr. NOrton
waves me bye
*
I breathe
another breath
closer to the last
in passing
*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-04-19 11:48 AM

Sigh.
Love, Margherita

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-04-19 11:57 AM

sad

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-22 11:26 AM

Moribund.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-04-22 11:32 AM

I don't know why this struck me this way...just one of many interpretations, but I felt that catch in your throat...waiting to see if the next paycheck will come, or if you will be in the line.
Current events I've read loom heavily.
Great and diverse write.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-22 12:21 PM

neat piece

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2004-04-23 10:05 PM

Margherita

MGROVES

Grover

ThisDiamond

passing shadows

Thanks for your comments!
Keep keeping poetry alive!
pictureme :-)

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