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exhale
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0 posted 2004-05-30 01:53 AM


this sudden burst of emotion
could make my heart explode
i'm shaking from just talking to you
the words leave my mouth by miracle only
i'm frozen by love
you seem to move so easily
i'm standing here like stone
your gliding through my life
like you own it
and you do
every little peice of it
every little peice of me..

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-30 02:07 AM


well get unfroze girl! heat it up!
Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-30 02:29 AM


Yeah, what she said

Susan

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MGROVES
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california
3 posted 2004-05-30 03:37 AM


yea heat it up, feel the sun's rays around you and feel the warmth,as your friends here,feel you


Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2004-05-30 04:21 AM


great write,I know exactly how you feel though.. love is scary

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-05-30 04:29 AM


It certainly feels that way sometimes,
doesn't it?
Hugs to you,
Ethel

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