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Open Poetry #32

The Place In My Heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-05-28 05:02 PM

The Place In My Heart

I know not where
she found the love
in my heart.
It was in a place where
I couldn't find it.
She looked around
and found the place
in my heart that
wanted love to
astound it.

I know not where
she found the love
in my heart.
It was in a place where
I couldn't find it.
She looked around
and found the place
in my heart that
wanted love to
surround it.

JamesLee
May28
2004

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-05-28 05:09 PM

Oh, JamesMichael, this was so sweet -- one of your best!

.....jo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-05-28 05:12 PM

James,
I don't always comment but I often read the poetry here, and of all the poetry you have written (all very good) this piece was about an innocent love...and the delight of that came chiming through.
Wonderful.
TD

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