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muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

0 posted 2004-04-18 03:41 PM




© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-18 03:43 PM


OOOOH WOW!!!  I love this!!!  Fantastic!!
Beautiful pic and perfect words!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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2 posted 2004-04-18 05:45 PM


I double the WOW...beautiful!

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Margherita
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3 posted 2004-04-18 06:02 PM


Dust Dancers! I love this.
The words, the colors, the artist's eyes.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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4 posted 2004-04-18 06:43 PM


Love it Dawn

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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5 posted 2004-04-18 07:08 PM


awesome!
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6 posted 2004-04-18 07:49 PM


Lovely, lovely senyru!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

choshi
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7 posted 2004-04-18 08:05 PM


Amazing photo and words...lots of power and energy here...~P
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2004-04-18 08:32 PM


WEll done!
What a spin you put on beautiful things...
TD

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9 posted 2004-04-18 08:59 PM


So very pretty,  Dawn~
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10 posted 2004-04-18 10:05 PM


beautiful my friend...

jwesley

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11 posted 2004-04-19 12:00 PM


kewl buddy
i love how you marry the image to the words or is it the words to the image ... ummm anywho i love this one and would hate to see a dust disco!

muted
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12 posted 2004-04-19 03:52 AM


Thank you everybody!
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13 posted 2004-04-19 07:53 AM


Hey...I've seen these in my son's bedroom when he turns on the ceiling fan!!....nice write gal...
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14 posted 2004-04-19 10:54 AM


Love the way you're doing these, Dawn.
I love them.
Hugs,
Ethel

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15 posted 2004-04-19 11:40 AM


lovely dancers Dawn....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

LeeJ
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16 posted 2004-04-19 12:59 PM


absolutely stunning, both the imaginative write and the picture, very much enjoyed!
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17 posted 2004-04-19 09:17 PM


Muted,

I have to be honest with you... it is close... the photo or the words... they both are beautiful!

forne_marin
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18 posted 2004-04-24 01:17 PM


This is magnificent, Muted.

Really, thoroughly enjoyed it!

I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

jennirey
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19 posted 2004-04-24 01:24 PM


This was beutiful, thanks for sharing this dance.
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