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Open Poetry #32

To the New Lover (haiku)

forne_marin
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since 2004-04-13

Posts 140
Spartanburg, South Carolina

0 posted 2004-04-18 02:59 PM

TO THE NEW LOVER
Lovers are oft like
Chimmneysweeps cleaning soot from
active volcanos.

But the most wonderful thing about Tiggers is I'm the only one!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-04-18 05:54 PM

I don't know whether to laugh or not...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-04-18 06:19 PM

Good write...enjoyed!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2004-04-18 06:24 PM

thats one way to put it. i believe there's another. just as all isnt black and white

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-18 07:10 PM

well I guess its true

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2004-04-18 07:27 PM

What a picture!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

6 posted 2004-04-18 07:32 PM

Vie va le passion....STOKE the FIRES.
Well done,

INclan

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-04-18 08:06 PM

Hah!!!! ~P

forne_marin
Member

since 2004-04-13

Posts 140
Spartanburg, South Carolina

8 posted 2004-04-24 11:41 AM

Glad you guys liked it.

I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

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