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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-05-24 10:32 AM





if you only knew
that which awaits for you
the song inside a heart
that spills over in the dampness
of the moment

if you only knew the locked away
the secrets held hostage,
words not yet explored
whose feelings
trickle down these pages

invisible ink
flowing, navigating between the lines
shifting course, paving the way
awaiting your signature...

if you only knew.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-05-24 10:55 AM


sounds like something is about to happen very soon
feel the urgency in this,pretty intense

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-05-24 11:32 AM


Maureen, I think you are among many who write their souls upon this canvas.  I hope the name you are calling listens.     
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-05-24 11:43 AM


"if you only knew
that which awaits for you
the song inside a heart
that spills over in the dampness
of the moment"

Excellent write Maureen....
so many I could say that line to,
If you only knew...yes.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-05-24 12:52 PM


secrets...

(sigh)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-05-24 07:34 PM


by any other name...tis still a poem...
and one that makes me say-- I wish I had wrote this!!!!
very very cool write poetess M.

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