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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2004-05-23 01:30 PM

parting the water
the slow deliberate step
of a white heron

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-23 01:31 PM

very cool write! very cool!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-05-23 01:44 PM

Much enjoyed!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-05-23 03:55 PM

Clever girl...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-23 04:11 PM

I can see this, I love watching herons. Cool.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2004-05-23 04:25 PM

Yes. I can see this. And I've watched this happen many times. Very beautiful.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-05-23 05:39 PM

Very nicely done indeed!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-05-23 05:59 PM

the blue herons were very rare in OHio, but we they have been slowly re-introduced. They are fascinating! Occasionally, we see one on the farm pond. Glad to catch this write!
Sadie

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

8 posted 2004-05-24 02:15 AM

thanks so much everyone - I am glad it rang true for you!

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

9 posted 2004-05-24 06:01 PM

I love these and I can't write them! So frustrating!

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2004-05-24 11:34 PM

Another great haiku. I am impressed at all the poets here who are so very good at this form. Your brought this one to life!
pictureme :-)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-05-25 12:27 PM

Beki~
Yes ... it talks~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

12 posted 2004-05-25 12:33 PM

Very Nice!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2004-05-25 11:09 AM

OOOOhhhhh...awesome!
TD

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

14 posted 2004-05-25 05:21 PM

Oh yeah! I like that one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

15 posted 2004-05-25 06:35 PM

Stalking the minnow,
his eyes fixed to the water.
Heron is patient.

glider

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