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Open Poetry #32

Chemical Diatribe

Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2004-05-20 06:32 AM

Welcome all to my most cunning diatribe
woven so calmly and dare I say, blithely:

In the source of its chemical intercourse
the life of a being can be simply seen;

Dopamine unleashed by a seratonin kiss;
an endorphin reaction to counter with bliss.

A simple compound sounds like ringing bells.
Every synapse passes through a billion cells.

Synapses flashing,
receptors engaging
pathways recoiling
adrenaline entwining
alpha waves ordering
chemicals coursing

Through all these things is language born.
The chemical creates the thought.
The thought begets the word
that births the mind:
the mind that penned this diatribe.

"And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea,
But never a moment ceased the fight of the one and the fifty-three."

[This message has been edited by Triskaidekaphobia (05-20-2004 08:56 AM).]

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2004-05-20 06:47 AM

Hmm... I need someone to love lol
This is a clever write

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-05-20 07:54 AM

Triskaidekaphobia
This viturperation flies like a buterfly.
Enjoyed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-05-20 09:12 AM

Near climactic as the words surged...
Captured quite well.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-05-20 09:13 AM

Very unique style -- enjoyed!

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2004-05-20 09:39 AM

again, I comment on how much power your words hold...addictions are a tool of darkness...understanding them is the way to overcome, and understanding that a Higher power is necessary to help one through.....
ok enough preaching...this is an insightful write..very creative

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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6 posted 2004-05-20 12:40 PM

I like your style

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