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"Speechless" ( an offering for my own challenge)
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"Speechless" ( an offering for my own challenge) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In awe of Natures' grandeur, mutely stand eyes focused on the wonders which appear, uniquely formed, as patterns in the sand, awash, as waves retreat, words disappear. As sunlight filters through the canopy in columns raised through forests cloaked in mist, does seems beyond ones' capability to so describe these scenes as they exist. To stare in rapt amazement of nights' sky, quite lost in silent wonder of it all, though be, almost, improper we should try to break this spell when solemn moments call, inadequately, finding words to say, in view of things which take ones' breath away. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (05-20-2004 08:02 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And there you have it. Perfection. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hummmm.... Yep. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc So lovely in form and content! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...perfect!! I don't always reply...but I always read. Much enjoy your work. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ This is beauty beyond compare~ So skillfully you work the art~  I SO admire you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
fantastic! you are always great to read, no matter what the subject |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
To stare in rapt amazement of nights' sky, quite lost in silent wonder of it all, Yes, yes. Excellent. Enjoyed. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Totally awesome! Bravo, bravo! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunshine,JL, Martie, Enchantress,Marge, muted,Susan, and iliana. Thank you all so much, but, much like "Jello" I believe there's always room for improvement. With that in mind , I'll leave you with this. Thanks again, Doc "Shakespear Meets The Sopranos" By name, see, I am "Bic" Pentameter. Youse guys should listen up, this thing I know. Dat bum, da one called "Shakespear" as it were, I taught to speak da language like a pro. He says, "Hey Bic, how 'bout youse learn me that, you know, that fancy thing youse do with words." I says, " Yo, Will, take off that stupid hat and gimme that there quill youse look absurd!" "If youse would like to write like a "made" man, ya gots ta watch your meter all da while!" Da Bum, da bum, da bum, da bum, he ran and took the credit for this certain style! Da bum, if he was here, I'd have his head! For I am "Bic" Pentameter, I said! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, Thanks, but how in the heck did this end up front page news again? Must have been posted under the " corrections " column. Doc |
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