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Grampa,(Responce to Muted's Chalenge)
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Grampa,(Responce to Muted's Chalenge) |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Here is some cinquains "Grampa" Living Always with me Deep in my memories giving me truth when I am lost Grampa Giving Me all your love I will love you always You showed me strength when you had none Grampa Knowing You were dying those last few short hours I promised I'd never forget Grampa Muted I taped in to deep stuff. It was hard you better appreciate. Love Juju |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very heartfelt and loving, my friend, your heart shows well in this. jwesley |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou Jwesley Juju |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 sweet Juju, of course i appreciate!! thank you for reaching into yourself out of love for your grandfather, showing me the value of ties that go beyond life...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so emotionally powerful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A few words, holding such precious essence! You went deep and shared beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Muted: I am glad you liked it. -Juju- PS: Thankyou -Juju- Margerita: Thankyou. I tried doing something called a Cinquain(three sets), because you don't see them as much. -Juju- |
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