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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2004-05-18 11:35 AM


I touch upon your lips as rain
Lingering in salivate of understand again
Once spoken to the chants of summer showers
And all the secret wishes that accept empowers
Worthy is the gift left in a timeless blush
Pursed forward to move freely passions rush
We are the winding rivers pulse
Two droplets mingle goblets stream in blend results

Curious consumes impetuous slide
Each blade of thirst new green astride
Turned gleefully, agreeably
The moist of April tears malleably
Fall playfully all trickled spheres a gaze
The mood of open say, so intimate a taste portrays
Returned my breath to whisper in your heart
I touch upon your lips as rain, so longed apart

Love swallows me in drink eternally
As rain revives, its kiss such sweet fidelity

Copyright Kkh 5/18/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-05-18 11:58 AM


Exquisite!
JL
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since 2004-04-01
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2 posted 2004-05-18 12:03 PM


WOW-WE...

"Returned my breath to whisper in your heart
I touch upon your lips as rain, so longed apart"

Very nice write!

JL

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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-05-18 12:08 PM


beautifully rhymed, TD

"The mood of open say"...if only

M

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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-18 12:43 PM


beautiful
iliana
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5 posted 2004-05-18 03:33 PM


"The moist of April tears malleably
Fall playfully all trickled spheres a gaze
The mood of open say, so intimate a taste portrays
Returned my breath to whisper in your heart
I touch upon your lips as rain, so longed apart

Love swallows me in drink eternally
As rain revives, its kiss such sweet fidelity"

B E A U T I F U L ! ! !   ....jo

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6 posted 2004-05-18 07:44 PM


Kathleen~
Ah, such breathless beauty in your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-05-18 08:10 PM


We are the winding rivers pulse

Sigh.  Very nice.

Smiles --Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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