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Waking to Rain
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Waking to Rain |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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~~~ I want to walk in the captivity of your memory who knew darkness was the name of streets and edges -- the complicated path in which soul&emotion combine meaning palms pressed praying -- allow me to become the river that breathes woman ~ and lets go ~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Lauren, you have a way of smoothing out the edges. And like always, your poetry breathes, so fluently~ Very pretty, sweet poetess~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
become the river that breathes woman Beautiful. Susan |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Geez, I was just loggin' off when this popped up... Glad I stuck around a bit longer..."the cavity of your memory..." Nice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I want to walk in the captivity of your memory Wonderful lines, dear Lauren! Love, Margherita |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want to walk in the captivity of your memory ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ was the name of streets and edges -- the complicated path in which soul&emotion combine meaning ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ become the river that breathes woman ~ and lets go ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ya had me from the opening plea.... *sigh* in which soul&emotion combine meaning yessssssssssssssssssss become the river that breathes woman ~ and lets go yeessssssssss...exactly...... *sigh*  I love you more the further I go ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~As gentle as a whisper...beautiful,...pretty lady~  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you slowed the beating of my heart for a moment there, it sighed...you are so gentle |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Happy Birthday sweetie   |
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