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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-05-15 12:18 PM


(the first one is about "any Friday")
Saturday’s Musings (if your guitar’s keyed-up)


work, labor, savor
you could be poor, sad, forlorn
buck up, it’s Friday


ferns, soil, garden spot
stand in shade where not too hot
sunburn prevention


clematis status
coiled about the post, a toast
beauty’s paradigm


coffee-cup morning
leisure onset to the day
remember the chores


catkins’ philander
stretched across sofa’s backbone
never a dog’s life

©May 15, 2004



Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-05-15 12:55 PM


Every sensational Saturday starts with a great plan!
Loved this.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-05-15 01:01 PM


would read better without the copyright dates beneath each one

but good write!

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2004-05-15 01:02 PM


Thank you both! And p.s.....good suggestion!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
4 posted 2004-05-16 06:46 AM


I like the last very much
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2004-05-16 06:59 AM


quote:
coffee-cup morning
leisure onset to the day
remember the chores



Did you write this for me? Sigh ....

Beautiful thoughts and insights.
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-05-16 10:14 AM


I enjoyed each and every one!

VAS writes senryus
That appeal to one and all.
Reality checks.


EA

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