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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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Ireland

0 posted 2004-05-13 05:35 AM


Even if the heavenly stars are falling

And the silky blue oceans do rise

Even when all around is ensnared by temptations mauling

On you my heart relies



They say that love is blind

To then I waste no precious time

Why does love have to be conveniently defined

Whenever my broad smile ranges from the ridiculous to the sublime



Take my hand, take my heart

We shall nevermore be apart

Let me follow, let me guide

For you I will always be beside



© Copyright 2004 MERCURY - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-13 11:46 AM


Yes love is like this.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-05-13 12:28 PM


this is gorgeous! I wish you were read more...people are missing out...

maybe if you replied to other's poetry, you would get to be more known and more people would read your work

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-05-13 08:22 PM


Ah, love -- enjoyed.

Susan

pictureme
Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
4 posted 2004-05-13 10:12 PM


MERCURY,
this is card love proud!
I felt the love!
keep writing, dear friend,
pictureme :-)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2004-05-15 12:33 PM


Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-05-15 04:20 AM



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