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GlisteningRain
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The clouds

0 posted 2004-05-12 03:39 PM



brown orbs: Ignite a flame that burns fire
hair: Wild and frolicking desire
skin: Tan and milkish..fitting perfect morsels
body: Like a luscious void enticing souls to hold her

© Copyright 2004 Byron Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2004-05-12 04:01 PM


Wow...
Need a towel for that cold shower??
Whoa!!
Good one!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-05-12 04:22 PM


Very nice Byron..
Much enjoyed the read.
hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-05-12 11:37 PM


alot of sensual writes tonight. oh the memories. thanks for getting the motor started this was great


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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2004-05-12 11:46 PM


WOW

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-13 02:21 AM


whew! very descriptive and HOT!
iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-14 06:31 PM


Great description of an enchantress!
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2004-05-14 06:47 PM


Very, very potent poem - a brew that can't be missed.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Martie
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8 posted 2004-05-14 08:27 PM


Enjoyed the sensual sweet of this.
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2004-05-14 11:15 PM


ByronLandry,Jr~
Enjoyed the steamy condensation on my monitor~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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