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jellybeans
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0 posted 2004-05-11 04:28 PM


a momma missing a son
a little one missing a daddy
fair is a word
not spoken

my arms wrap tightly around her
we miss him
together

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2004-05-11 04:34 PM


jellybeans...this one bleeds
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2 posted 2004-05-11 04:50 PM


Oh, my friend...

I wish I could wrap you both in a hug.

jellybeans
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3 posted 2004-05-11 04:53 PM


thank you ladies, both of the poems today were started a while back but didn't want to be finished, the first finished itself by sheer resolve, and then this one I realized was finished as is...what else can I say...sigh........thank you
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-05-11 05:27 PM


I can't say much to console you..just lend you some warmth and understanding hugs


M

iliana
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USA
5 posted 2004-05-11 05:34 PM


All I can say is
JL
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6 posted 2004-05-11 07:01 PM


Such a sad story.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-05-11 07:03 PM




RobertB
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8 posted 2004-05-11 07:30 PM


It's strange to see such blood in writing.

But I know it.

Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-05-11 07:33 PM


So few words packed so full of emotion.
It is hard to miss those we love.  May peace be yours,

Susan

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