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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2004-05-10 11:13 PM


I took my first steps today Daddy
And you weren’t here to see
You weren’t here to catch me Daddy
When I fell and scraped my knee
  
I said my first words today Daddy
And you weren’t here to listen
No one really knows Daddy
All the things that you’re a missin’

You’re out protecting Freedom Daddy
In an unforgiving land
Please, hurry home to me Daddy
So you can hold my hand

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (05-12-2004 12:25 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-05-10 11:24 PM


A touching bitter sweet read! So many daddys
that need to hold a hand! continue to pray for peace!
pictureme :-)

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