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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-10 02:38 AM

The Pain of Missing You  (Memories)

Honey I miss
your sweet
caress,
and I can't find
anyone to ease
the pain of
my duress.
Please come
back to me,
before the pouring rain
saturates me with pain.
What good am
I without you.
As long as we're
apart I'm a lonely
prisoner of my heart,
feeling the pain
of missing you.

JamesLee
June08
2004
Memories of
my past.
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-10 02:41 AM

I'll go find her
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2 posted 2004-05-10 11:09 PM

~sigh~ can feel the pain in this James

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3 posted 2004-05-10 11:29 PM

Oh man do I know this pain? Very well penned my friend my heart goes out to old memories and here's to making new ones
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-05-12 02:44 AM

Thank you passing shadows, Greeneyes and Jeffrey for the nice responses...James
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5 posted 2004-05-13 05:04 AM

how could anyone ever leave you. such a romantic. good heart, all writes are of love i hope she comes back. take care
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-13 05:14 PM

Thank you MGROVES...some find it easy to leave...if the heart is not there, they don't want to be there...and we have to let them go...of course we miss them and have pain but I don't want someone to stay with me that doesn't want to...this happened a ways back and I am doing allright...James
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7 posted 2004-05-14 01:00 AM

  Sorry 'bout the pain but glad to see it's in the past.  Good write!   ........jo
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8 posted 2004-05-14 01:06 AM

a wonderful write very good and very heart felt

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JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-05-15 12:11 PM

Thank you iliana and destiny for the nice responses...James
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