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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-09 07:21 PM

Loves call awakens me, swept up so dreamily to dew-covered morn
Our time eternally, you stand so close to me in half light your adorn
My body trembles so, the skies are indigo the grasses full and new
The moment comes to speak, all that I truly seek, your eyes remit in blue

The echo overtakes the tone of voice it makes revealing but this truth
A magic spell was cast within the hourglass of fates consuming proof
Of what I understand I reach to take your hand among the petals glow
And all I sense inside comes suddenly applied to flood the surface so

A forward step I make into your arms to take the last of winter weather to the spring
I lift my face to see you looking back at me and we partake a breath in tease of summers sing
And all I’ve waited for is suddenly so sure for it was this that once awakened us to see
That all I want is you, for you to want me too, a willing step into the meadow blossoms we

Copyright Kkh 5/9/04

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-09-2004 08:40 PM).]

LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

1 posted 2004-05-09 07:39 PM

Bravo! Wonderful, flowing perfection!

The echo overtakes the tone of voice it makes revealing but this truth
A magic spell was cast within the hourglass of fates consuming proof
Of what I understand I reach to take your hand among the petals glow
And all I sense inside comes suddenly applied to flood the surface so

I really loved this

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-05-09 08:38 PM

TD --
"The moment comes to speak, all that I truly seek, your eyes remit in blue"
-- a line like no other!
And that last stanza, WOW! to all.

...jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-09 09:12 PM

Kathleen this is so amazingly beautiful!
You do weave wonders with your magical pen.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-09 09:17 PM

I love how you use long sentences!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-05-13 08:30 AM

The echo overtakes the tone of voice it makes revealing but this truth
A magic spell was cast within the hourglass of fates consuming proof
Of what I understand I reach to take your hand among the petals glow
And all I sense inside comes suddenly applied to flood the surface so

Of what I understand I reach to take your hand...that floored me...love it...and the way you are expressing your kindness and willingness to allow

Outstanding write!

I left a message for you in PIP Talk Lounge...it was a take off of Golden Rose's Poem the other day and your comment.

Have a great day!

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-05-13 09:23 AM

Oh yes, beautiful emotion and imagery. I am not much for long poems, but this one is a beauty....You have placed me right in that blossoming meadow ~P

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-05-13 09:43 AM

TD this is enchanting!
Goes into my library to be enjoyed again!
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-05-13 09:45 AM

Thank you all for your kind support...and all the inpiration you continue to provide on these seas of blue.
TD

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2004-05-13 10:21 AM

yes this is excellant

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-05-13 11:22 AM

"Loves call awakens me, swept up so dreamily to dew-covered morn
Our time eternally, you stand so close to me in half light your adorn
My body trembles so, the skies are indigo the grasses full and new
The moment comes to speak, all that I truly seek, your eyes remit in blue"

~ A captivating intro to a romance novel!!!

EA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-05-13 11:25 AM

Kathleen~
A treasured-keep from your meadow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

12 posted 2004-05-13 01:53 PM

Absolutely marvelous write!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2004-05-13 02:35 PM

TD

You weave magic into this lovely!

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