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PsychoticBunni
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0 posted 2004-05-09 05:57 PM


Freed Captive

Teardrops falling from the sky
As I wonder where he is
When i dream of love gone by
I see that beautiful face of his

He has left me here to die
Or to live in misery's sea
How can I spread my wings and fly?
I chained myself to you for eternity

Maybe he will come to claim me
End my Doubts, my Fears, my Woes
Together we will forever be
But when, no one knows

Until then i cling to your shadow
I love you

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-05-09 06:15 PM


Great oxymoron!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2004-05-09 07:00 PM


are you talking about two here?

you write "him" and then you write "you"

chained to him? for eternity?

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