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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Classify I’ve lost my touch of classify That once to me was apple pie Each thing a world within its core Has now dissolved in evermore For if you float beyond your shell Beyond the stars and wishing well You will see a faultless sea Of everything that’s meant to be. That’s not to say you will not pass Beyond this sky this home of grass Nor can you turn each moment’s grime Into a better moment’s time To me our sail upon the sea Is nothing but a sip of tea? A note plucked out an endless tune A grain within an endless dune To classify eternity You have to sail an endless sea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It's always a pleasure to read you Seymour, love the way this flows. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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velociraptor Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 12 |
I like this poem its rhyme is nice.Its a very good poem i liked it.  Daniel(velociraptor) |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Each thing a world within its core Has now dissolved in evermore Yes yes, to realize we are the microcosm of the macrocosm. Very nice poem, with solid philosophical implications. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
For if you float beyond your shell Beyond the stars and wishing well You will see a faultless sea Of everything that’s meant to be. and float within your words i shall |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Raising the sail now, Sy... A good Sunday to you, m'friend.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed every line, Sy.... Good Morning and a Happy Mother's Day to Isabel.  M |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah! Words to live by, Sey: For if you float beyond your shell Beyond the stars and wishing well You will see a faultless sea Of everything that’s meant to be. Corinne |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
On that endless sea, I wish you fair weather and light breezes. Much enjoyed Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey, enjoyed sailing along with you in this one! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maree It's always a pleasure having you read me. Daniel, Thank you, glad you enjoyedd. LucidityNow A delightful comment. inkedgoddess Thank you sweet. Sunshine  Mauren I thank you and Isabel thanks you. Corinne, Thank you dear. scorpio, Glad you enjoyed. iliana, Enjoyed having you aboard. passing, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, I enjoyed sailing with this all the way through, and chuckled when I read the end. How can one classify an "endless" sea? I like your wit. "To classify eternity You have to sail an endless sea" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm late...I'm late.... Having a busy Mom's Day....but, ran in to read you Sy. Hope you day was as wonderful as this piece. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite Thank you your observation made me chuckle. Nancy, Happy mothers day dear. |
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