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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2004-02-11 03:10 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#195

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


he feeds the birds

that same stare

every day

empty hands

half-empty bottles

wrestling thoughts

gripped by worn wonder


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© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Death
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Twilight
1 posted 2004-02-11 04:09 AM


"worn wonder" I like that line very much.

Well done
D

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-02-11 12:43 PM


sad...I like 'em that way
Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-11 12:45 PM


Good work! Grover.
iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-11 12:47 PM


Awwwwww --- excellent.  I saw a man in Central Park with a bag and a bottle, and pigeons -- unwanted by most.  Wow -- great painting.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-02-11 01:38 PM


Excellent portrait Mark.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-02-11 01:45 PM


MARK  
You're getting better. LOL Good one.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-11-2004 05:00 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
7 posted 2004-02-11 05:08 PM


Thank you, D -- that one stuck out for me too.

Yeah Dixie...  Very often, they somehow seem more "real" that way...

Thanks Grover -- glad you enjoyed.

illiana:  That's almost to-a-"t" what I pictured!

Nancy, it did come across like a portrait, didn't it?

Sy, that's the goal!   Thank you, Sir.

-MVS

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