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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-10 06:25 AM



A Little Taste

Atmosphere spread its warmth
spontaneous thoughts throughout the ride...
A little taste, of sweetness there
carried forth to rest inside.

She wondered, wandered back through door
after he had gone.
Returned to claim, the bottles two
their taste on tongue now drawn.

Labeled local, this sweetened drink
to slowly sip when 'lone
allowing dreams to sleep the thoughts,
returning to my own.


M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-10-2004 09:37 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-02-10 12:25 PM


AhMzWynter~
Now this one bears an award winning label~

*cheers*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-02-10 12:44 PM


melancholic and beautiful
Endlessecho
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I live within myself
3 posted 2004-02-10 02:00 PM


Very beautiful.  
jwesley
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4 posted 2004-02-10 02:57 PM


Wonderful.

jwesley

Grover
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5 posted 2004-02-10 03:01 PM


A keeper! A1+++ Grover.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-10 04:05 PM


Very nicely said Maureen..
bittersweet write.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

VAS
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7 posted 2004-02-10 04:51 PM


fascinating wording

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2004-02-10 07:14 PM


This is a wonderful poem.
iliana
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9 posted 2004-02-11 03:06 PM


M -- a taste never forgotten I'm sure.  Loved this one.  .....hugs, jo
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